Author's Comments:

Some_unknown_dude, 02 Sep 2006 11:56 am

Leon Mantennya Mantennya is pronounced "manteņa"... just wanted to leave that clear.

User's Comments:

ninjarobot, 02 Sep 2006 12:36 pm

I LOVE this XDDDDDDD

catqueen13, 02 Sep 2006 01:53 pm

Poor guy... He seems so shocked. o.O

diana_hnd, 03 Sep 2006 02:58 am

What would have crossed the mind of our luckless wandering boy when that sword missed him by inches...

Wandering boy: Oh NO! I can't believe I forgot to eat my Humita and Fioravanti (chapter2-p01)!

Sorry, couldn't resist it! XDD

One thing I would suggest for this page is: Even if it's a clean slice, some particles (or dust) would have dropped from where it was cut in half. At least that's what I think. ^^;

Nevertheless, this page's pretty cool.

tRickityHouses, 04 Sep 2006 12:54 am

HAHHAHA didnt expect that

Yuuko-chan-sama (Guest), 04 Sep 2006 12:49 pm

o.O Gosh what a shocked boy!!! (well after that who cant be)instead of "Boom!", "Crash" isnt better? (just a lil sugg. dont mind it)
hes very mad!! O.o
very nice page!!

Jessica94, 04 Sep 2006 06:36 pm

anger anger... he should learn to control himself before bad stuff happens

*fives*

cahir-the-witcher, 10 Sep 2006 07:02 am

woahO_o ok so i decided to read what you have
and it's sooooo coool*O*main chara looks lil bit like amidamaru from shaman king but still i adore him very much<3

Kigeki, 21 Nov 2006 01:07 pm

leon! i remember leon!the deforestation no jutsu dude.

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